You went to your friend house and had meal. Write a letter to your friend thanking him and his family for the meal. 1) Tell what you enjoyed about the meal. 2) Thanks to his parents and what you think about them 3) suggest arrangements for his invite at your place.

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Dear Saura, Hope you and your family
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doing great.I really miss the time we had together. I am writing
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letter to express my happiness for having a time together. I cannot thank you enough for the tasty food made by
aunt
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my aunt
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.All the dishes were so delicious . My favourite food was the
appitizer
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appetiser
. It was
mouth watering
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. I want to
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you for taking the time to do
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.I am beyond
greatful
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grateful
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task achievement
Provide a more complete response by addressing all points mentioned in the task: specifically thanking his parents and suggesting arrangements for his visit to your place.
coherence cohesion
Maintain a single idea per paragraph for clearer structure. Use separate paragraphs to discuss the meal, thank his parents, and suggest a visit.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and tone of the letter are friendly and appropriate for a letter to a friend.
task achievement
The letter conveys a feeling of gratitude effectively.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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