In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the histrory of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?
A history
is always Remove the article
History
profoud
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profound
discovered
something new feels Wrong verb form
discovering
satisfied
, including finding Replace the word
satisfying
interesting
story behind an old house or building. Correct article usage
an interesting
This
essay will examine some
various reasons why Correct quantifier usage
apply
discovered
something new is exciting.
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discovering
To begin
with, there are numerous justification
why discovering something is interesting. The main reason could be because people are the most Fix the agreement mistake
justifications
uniqe
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unique
creature
in Fix the agreement mistake
creatures
this
mother of earth, feeling curious is one of these uniqe
especially Correct your spelling
unique
discovered
something new that never imagined earlier Wrong verb form
discovering
such
as finding out about a
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the
mistery
of a house. Correct your spelling
mystery
For example
, recently it is a huge news
that Remove the article
huge news
a piece of huge news
historic
researchers just found that there was a building lost in Correct word choice
historical
egypt
. Change the capitalization
Egypt
This
discovery shocked a
whole world entirely.
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the
Furthermore
, in this
modern era with an advance of
technology people more easy to do a lot of research. Change preposition
in
For instance
, censor detector. If looking back to 100 years ago, it is imposible
to know what Correct your spelling
impossible
happend
in past, but with Correct your spelling
happened
help
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the help
its
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it's
it is
more easy
to find something that had been buried a long time ago. Replace the words
easier
Moreover
, there is a text recognation
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recognition
tools
which can convert scanned documents into readable text, making it easier to search historical texts.
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tool
To sum up
, the main factor why finding history is profound is because it gives feeling
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a feeling
satisfaction
because find the Change preposition
of satisfaction
misterious
story behind the building. Correct your spelling
mysterious
This
discovery supported
by technology, like text Add a missing verb
is supported
recognation
and censor Correct your spelling
recognition
detector
to make it Fix the agreement mistake
detectors
more
easier.Change the word
apply
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