The line graph shows the numbers of queries received by the tourist information office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.

The  line graph shows the numbers of queries received  by the  tourist information office in one city over a six-month period in  2011.
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The line diagram illustrates the data about how many questions and how they were received in a tourist information office in a period of six months in 2011.
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, is noticeable that fewer people ask by means of mail, electronically or in person as time goes by. The figure shows how queries in person were the most chosen and they climbed starting with 400 in January and hitting the peak at 1900 in June.
In addition
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, a great part of travellers called the tourist office in that period, the number of questions fluctuated over the months but the general trend was upward; Calls suffered a slight fall in February, grew the following weeks, and
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stabilized at 1000 in May and June,
lastly
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increased again until 1600.
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, is seen that tourists did not like asking by letter as much as the other options,
as a consequence
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it gradually decreased as the months went by, reaching the bottom in the
last
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four weeks with half of the queries that were asked at the beginning of the year. To summarize, there was a growth in queries over the first half of 2011.
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