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The chart below shows the average price per kilo of clothing imported into the European Union from seven major countries of origin in 1997 and 2003. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below shows the average price per kilo of clothing imported into the European Union from seven major countries of origin in 1997 and 2003. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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This
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 for clothing imported into the EU coming from 7 major regions during the years 1993 and 2003
Overall
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, Argentinian clothes have the highest cost in both years,
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 clothes coming from Bangladesh are much cheaper. In 1993, Argentina was selling the most expensive fabric clothing at a
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 of around 27
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, followed by Brazil which was selling a single
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 at an amount of almost 23
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. Clothing from Japan is the third most expensive at a rate of 15
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, followed by China at 10
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, India selling at around 8
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 and Bangladesh being the cheapest country to import clothing from at a
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 of just under 5
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. In 2003, Brazil kept the same
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 rate since 1993 and China raised their prices to just over 15
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, putting them in third place
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 of Japan which decreased their fabric cost to under 15
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. India and Bangladesh slightly increased their prices and Argentina is still the most pricey of all countries.
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