The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps illustrate the future development of a small

town

named Islip and its present condition as well.

Overall

, it can be seen that various facilities will be available in future and all features will be situated inside of a dual carriageway. At present time, Islip

town

have

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a main

road

located in the middle of the

town

and the

road

starts from the west and ends at the east part of the

town

. The middle of the

road

surrounded

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is surrounded

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by shops and housing in front of the south shop. A school situated on the southwest

side

of the

town

where a

road

can be seen a housing next to the school.

Moreover

, a park

located

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is located

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on the southeast

side

of the

town

. In the future plan, there will be lots of facilities inside of a dual carriageway, a bus station, shopping

center

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centre

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next to it and car parking will be there as well. there will be two new

housing

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houses

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one will be northeast

side

and another will be on the south

side

. There will be no main

road

because of the ring

road

but in the

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centre

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center

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center,

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we can see that a way only for

pedestrian

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pedestrians

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However

school

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the school

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will be at the same location

where

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it was before.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words town, road, side with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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3
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

209 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

pedestrian-only zone
dual carriageway
current
surrounded by
propose
infrastructure
bus station
car park
residential housing
traffic flow
connectivity
green spaces
recreational areas
development plans
main features
town center

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The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Many people today are worried about the large quantities of waste produced by ordinary households. What problems are caused by household waste, and what solutions may be possible in both the short and the long term?

Earlier technological developments brought more benefits and changed the lives of ordinary people more than recent developments ever will. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people believe that schools should teach students good behavior as well as other subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?