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Writing Samples
Band 8.5

A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntaryl unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntarylunpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntarylunpaid work. In your letter explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful . ⚫ give details of when you would be available for work

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my interest in the voluntary position at your hall. I have always had a great passion for history and culture, and I believe that working in a museum would be a wonderful opportunity for me to gain valuable experience
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 contributing to the preservation and promotion of art and heritage. I am particularly interested in
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 position because I enjoy learning about different periods of history and sharing
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 knowledge with others. I believe my strong communication skills would allow me to engage with visitors effectively and provide them with an enriching experience.
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, I am well-organized, and detail-oriented, and have experience with administrative tasks, which would be beneficial to the museum's day-to-day operations. I am available to work on weekends and during the summer holidays, and I am flexible with the hours. I would be thrilled to contribute as much time as needed to assist with the museum's activities. Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to the possibility of discussing
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 opportunity
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. Yours faithfully,

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task achievement
Provide more specific examples of skills or experiences directly related to the museum environment.
coherence cohesion
Include a brief introduction or background about yourself to further engage the reader.
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The letter clearly states the intention and interest in the voluntary position.
coherence cohesion
The paragraph structure is logical, supporting a clear flow of ideas.
coherence cohesion
Appropriate politeness and effective formal tone maintained throughout the letter.
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