The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.

The maps illustrate some changes that were made to a public park from 1920 until now.

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, the park witnessed a huge change during the period shown. Remarkable, it now

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more modern than

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in the past. Looking at the changes in more detail, we can see that on the left of the

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in 1920 there is a stage for musicians in the centre, and

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gardens and

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are located above and below the

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. By now, all of them except the

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garden

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above are no longer present, and

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, we see the addition of a new amphitheatre for concerts. Regarding the area on the right of the

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, in 1920 there was a

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garden

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and a pond for water plants above the

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, and a glasshouse and

seats

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below the

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, now, a

rose

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garden

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and a pond for water plants are destroyed to make room for a cafe shop and children's play area, and a glasshouse and

seats

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are replaced by a water feature. The centre area of the

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witnessed a significant change, in 1920 there was a fountain

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and two entrances situated above and below the

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. But, now, the two entrances are unchanged, the fountain was devastated, and

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a

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garden

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and

seats

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are built in its place.

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, now, on the right side of the

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, a new entrance underground car park is erected that did not exist on the original

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