The graph below shows the average monthly changes in the prices of three metals during 2014
The graph illustrates the rate of value differences each month
within
2014. The study involved three distinct materials, which were Change preposition
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cupper
, tickle and zink
By and large, Correct your spelling
copper
it is clear that
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nickle
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have
shown the greatest changes. These were Change the verb form
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the highest Change preposition
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and the lowest Remove the comma
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ones
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the middle of the studied period.
In terms of nickel, obviously, the rate of change was 6% in January, Change preposition
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been
dropped to 1% in March, and almost to 0.8%in May. Unnecessary verb
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sharp
decline was seen to -3% in June, before rising again to -2% in October. Add an article
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percentage was followed by a final increase Linking Words
to1
% in December.
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to 1
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, Copper and Linking Words
zink
, both Capitalize word
Zink
shew
almost the same trends. At the beginning of the study, an increase of 2% and 3%, for copper and zink,respectively. These figures were followed by a drop to -0.5%, and -1% in the same orders.
Fluctuations for both were the Correct your spelling
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before rising to almost 2% for both in December.Linking Words
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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