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The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the
car
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theft
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rate
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 per thousand
vehicles
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 in four countries (Great Britain,
Sweden
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, France, and Canada) over a nine-year
period
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 from 1990 to 1999.
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, the United Kingdom consistently had the highest
rate
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 of
car
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thefts
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theft
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 despite a decline toward the end of the
period
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,
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Sweden
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 was the only country to show a significant increase.
In contrast
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, France and Canada remained stable, with relatively low and consistent
theft
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 rates throughout. In 1990, the
car
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theft
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rate
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 in
Sweden
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 was approximately 5
incidents
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 per 1,000
vehicles
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.
This
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 figure rose steadily over the next six years, peaking at 14
incidents
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 in 1996. After plateauing for three years, it climbed
further
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 in 1999 to reach just under 15 thefts per 1,000
vehicles
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, the highest point recorded in
Sweden
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. The United Kingdom reported the highest number of
car
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 thefts throughout most of the
period
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, starting at 20
incidents
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 per 1,000
vehicles
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 in 1990. The
rate
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 fluctuated slightly but remained around
this
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 level until 1996, after which it declined steadily, ending at approximately 15
incidents
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 in 1999. Meanwhile, France and Canada recorded the lowest and most stable figures. Both countries reported
theft
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 rates between 5 and 7
incidents
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 per 1,000
vehicles
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 during the entire
period
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, with only minor fluctuations. By 1999, their figures converged at around 5
incidents
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, the lowest on the graph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words car, theft, rate, vehicles, sweden, period, incidents with synonyms.
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