The chart below gives information about Southland\'s main exports in 2000, *20.., and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below gives information about Southland\'s main exports in 2000, *20.., and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The chart illustrates Southland's main exports in 2000, 200... and 2025. It is divided
in
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three categories, international tourism,
daily
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dairy
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products and
meat
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products.
Overall
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, the graph shows that in the year 2000 eight billion holidaymakers visited the city.
In addition
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, the exportation of dairy and
meat
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products was seven and six billion. And, over the years we can see that the number of
tourist
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tourists
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that
have
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visited
Sotuthland
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Southland
has
incrised
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increased
, and the sales
of
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apply
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daily too.
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, the only
things
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thing
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thas
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that
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has declined over the years is
meat
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exportation. In 2025, the
chars
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chart
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ilustrates
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illustrates
that international tourism has increased to the top 10, and the sales of dairy and
meat
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is
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nine and five.
Afer
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taking all the details, we can conclude that over the
year
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years
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the number of
tourist
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tourists
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and dairy exportation has increased,
however
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, the sales of
meat
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has
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not
have
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had
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the same luck, because the numbers have declined over the years.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words meat with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • exports
  • trends
  • projections
  • comparisons
  • dairy products
  • meat products
  • international tourism
  • significant growth
  • decline
  • export values
  • overview
  • highlight
  • sectors
  • future projections
  • data analysis
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