Advertisements of snacks and toys have a great impact on children and their parents. So, the advertisements to children should be banned. Do you agree or disagree?
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business
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product
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products
snacks
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toys
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give
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have
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a large
for
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on
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the family
family
both Fix the agreement mistake
families
for
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apply
parents
as provider and Use synonyms
kids
as Use synonyms
consumer
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a consumer
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give
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impact
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an impact
to
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on
also
provide to Linking Words
kids
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,
like advertisements of Remove the comma
apply
snacks
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toys
will distract and influence them to have Use synonyms
it
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them
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apply
parents
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think
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a parent
the parent
parent
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parents
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base
on their plan, not because Wrong verb form
based
kids
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asked
them to give it to them, so Wrong verb form
ask
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parent's
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parents
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best things that they need to give to their Correct your spelling
the
kids
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growing
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kids
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see
tv
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TV
proggramme
about Correct your spelling
programme
programmes
toys
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parents
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their parents
for
the next Change preposition
apply
time
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apply
consumtion
or maybe addiction, and Correct your spelling
consumption
parents
will have a tough Use synonyms
time
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to provide
all of these.
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providing
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kids
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toys
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parent's
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parents
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to decided
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spent
a lot of Wrong verb form
spending
time
in Use synonyms
supermarket
, because they already Add an article
the supermarket
a supermarket
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own list. Namely, Wrong verb form
have their
parents
with work office Use synonyms
hour
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snacks
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kids
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time
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continue to
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advantage
for them.
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an advantage
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parent's
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parents
things
that they provide to their Correct article usage
the things
kids
, not tho Use synonyms
give
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giving
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a habbit
habbit
to compromise that Correct your spelling
habit
lead
to Correct subject-verb agreement
leads
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toys
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give
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have
negative
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the negative
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kids
and should banned.Use synonyms
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