The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
The line graph gives information about how many closed and newly
open
Wrong verb form
opened
shops
in a country over the period span of seven Use synonyms
years
(2011-2018).
Use synonyms
Overall
, it can Linking Words
be observe
that there was a fluctuation in the number of closures and opening of Change the verb form
be observed
shops
in a certain nation. Use synonyms
At
the beginning, there were more Change the preposition
In
shops
open than Use synonyms
close
; Correct word choice
closed
however
, it increased in the Linking Words
last
period.
In 2011, Linking Words
this
country opened more Linking Words
shops
at around 8500, and dramatically fell to 4000, Use synonyms
this
was half of the starting figure. Linking Words
Moreover
, it managed to climb at approximately Linking Words
at
6100 in 2014 and modestly dropped in the following Change preposition
apply
years
, ending at only 3000 in 2018.
Looking more at the graph, less than 7000 Use synonyms
shops
were closed in 2011, and significantly increased in three consecutive Use synonyms
years
before it dramatically Use synonyms
decline
to less than 1000 in 2015. Wrong verb form
declined
Furthermore
, Linking Words
this
trend managed to climb considerably in three Linking Words
years
with less than 6000 Use synonyms
closure
.Fix the agreement mistake
closures
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