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The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.
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The maps illustrate the changes made to a public
library
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 over a 20-year period.
Overall
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, the
library
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 has been significantly modernized, with a focus on technology, self-service, and creating multifunctional spaces. Twenty years ago, the
library
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 was more traditional in design. The entrance was located at the bottom
center
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, and immediately to the left was a large reading
room
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 dedicated to newspapers and magazines. Adjacent to
this
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 was a
children’s
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area
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 in the upper left corner,
while
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 a large enquiry
desk
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 was positioned near the
center
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 of the
library
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. The upper
right
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 corner housed bookshelves, and to the far
right
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 was a space for storage. Currently, the layout has undergone notable transformations. The reading
room
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 has been converted into a computer
room
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, reflecting a shift toward digital resources. The
children’s
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area
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 has been relocated to a larger space on the
right
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 side, which now
also
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 includes sofas and a storytelling
area
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, making it more child-friendly. Meanwhile, the former
children’s
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 section has been replaced by a lecture
room
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. Another significant change is the addition of a café where the enquiry
desk
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 once stood. The enquiry
desk
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 itself has been downsized and moved slightly to the left. To
further
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 enhance convenience, three self-service machines have been installed near the information
desk
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.
Additionally
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, the storage
area
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 on the far
right
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 has been removed to make
room
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 for the expanded
children’s
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 section. In conclusion, the
library
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 has been transformed from a traditional reading and study space into a modern facility that prioritizes technology, self-service, and community-oriented areas.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, room, children’s, area, desk, right with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • layout
  • shelving
  • reading area
  • reference section
  • encyclopedias
  • dictionaries
  • circulation desk
  • transactions
  • digital media
  • computer stations
  • multimedia rooms
  • café area
  • social environment
  • leisure-friendly
  • expanded reading areas
  • user experience
  • comfortable seating
  • children's section
  • engage younger readers
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