Many people believe that the increasing number of cars in cities is the biggest source of pollution and waste. Others think that industries are the ones causing pollutioin. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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a group of

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holds

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an opinion that the increasing

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of vehicles is the primary cause of

pollution

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, others believe that the factories are to be held responsible for it.

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, I feel that the rise in

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number

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of both

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cars

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and vehicles together is the causative factor for higher levels of

pollution

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. On

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hand, many

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metropolitan

cities are facing the problem of

increasing

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population since many

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migrate for the purpose of better

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jobs

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and

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.

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overcrowding, public transport facilities run out of capacity.

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leads to increasing the

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of buses, trains and autorickshaws for catering to the demands of the population. In order to tackle

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problem, many

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prefer buying their private vehicles like

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scooters

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and

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cars

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, eventually causing higher consumption of fossil fuels like petrol.

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result

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this

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higher amount of fuel combustion, the

pollution

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has risen.

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, to reach their offices on time, many

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avoid the crowd of public transportation by travelling in their personal

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which emit

carbondioxide

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carbon dioxide

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the environment

as a result

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of fuel combustion.

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, as the world is growing, there is a constant rise in the new

industries

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and factories being set up.

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these

industries

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are a necessity for

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maintaining

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and products for daily living, they come with a cost. These

industries

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release a harmful amount of obnoxious gases like ammonia and particulate matter into the air which results in worsening the quality of the air.

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, many

industries

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manufacturing steel utensils are known to emit many greenhouse gases into the atmosphere.

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, they

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let out

waste water

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containing many hazardous chemicals into the natural water streams causing water

pollution

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. In my opinion, in the recent era, all urban cities are evidencing higher levels of

pollution

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not only because of more

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but

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because of factories and

industries

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.

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is the result of industrialization and modernization which

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led to the increased needs of

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humans for livelihood. To summarize, whilst some believe that

cars

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are responsible for

pollution

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due to

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more burning of petrol and diesel, others say that

industries

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are causing

pollution

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.

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, I think that the increased

number

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of

cars

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and industrial manufacturing units are equally accountable for

rise

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the rise

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in the

pollution

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index.