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Nowadays many countries household waste e.g. food packaging is increasing day by day. What are the causes for that? How can this problem be solved?

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Recently, household
waste
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 items like
food
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 packaging
is
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 on a constant rise in many nations.
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 is
due to
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 an increasing number of people satisfying their hunger by consuming
ready to eat
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ready-to-eat
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food
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 items.
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 problem can be successfully dealt with by reusing the
food
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containers
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 or boxes. To commence with, the world is growing at a rapid pace
where
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and
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 people work hard to earn good money in order to
spend
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have
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 a decent lifestyle.
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, many people work
fulltime
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full-time
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 from 9am to 5pm and sometimes end up working overtime
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 the increased work pressure. Owing to their hectic schedules, they end up buying packaged
food
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 like wraps and burgers to
satiate
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 their hunger.
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, after reaching home they are too exhausted to cook any meals, and
as a consequence
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, frequently end up ordering
food
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 from the restaurants.
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 in turn has led to more plastic
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food-
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food containers
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containers
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to be
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being
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 present in
the
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apply
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household
waste
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.
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, the aluminium foil in which rolls and wraps are packed
are
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 disposed away after finishing the meal. The issue of increased
food
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packging
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packaging
 in the
waste
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 needs to be solved urgently as a majority of
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 is non-biodegradable. Many hotels and cafes use plastic
containers
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 to deliver the
food
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. Notably, these
containers
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 are quite durable and leakproof. But, they are not
ecofriendly
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eco-friendly
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.
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, they must
be
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not be disposed
off
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 immediately and must be reused at home to pack and store other things.
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, in India, it is a widespread practice to reuse
the
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restaurant
food
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containers
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 for storing chillies in the
refridgerator
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refrigerator
.
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 will be beneficial to reduce the
waste
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 material generated from the households,
ultimatley
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ultimately
 keeping the the environment safe. To recapitulate, hectic schedules leading to higher consumption of outside
food
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is
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are
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 a causative factor for the hike in the
food
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 packaging materials constituting the domestic
waste
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 of many countries.
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 can be tackled by following the strategy of reusing them.
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coherence cohesion
Work on providing a clearer logical structure linking ideas more effectively. Each paragraph should clearly support your main argument.
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Ensure all ideas are expressed as clearly and thoroughly as possible. Some points could be expanded further to enhance understanding.
coherence cohesion
The essay has a clear introduction and conclusion, which helps frame the issues and solutions effectively.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Consumer culture
  • Convenience-driven lifestyle
  • Pre-packaged meals
  • Takeaway options
  • Recycling processes
  • Regulations
  • Landfills
  • Marketing strategies
  • Consumer behavior
  • Excessive packaging
  • Environmental impact
  • Public awareness
  • Sustainable practices
  • Educational campaigns
  • Eco-friendly choices
  • Government regulations
  • Incentives
  • Waste reduction
  • Sustainable packaging materials
  • Technology and infrastructure
  • Waste management systems
  • Advanced sorting technologies
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