The graph below shows the monetary aid from four organizations to developing countries between 2008 and 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the financial aid donated by four organizations to improve facilities in various countries over a three-year period, from 2008 to 2011, measured in billions of
dollars
.
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Overall
, aid from organizations A and B increased, with institution A recording the highest figure throughout the period. Linking Words
In contrast
, allowance from Linking Words
organization
D saw a moderate decline over Use synonyms
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timeframe.
In 2008, the monetary aid provided by Linking Words
Organization
B was exactly 1.5 Use synonyms
billion
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dollars
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This
figure remained stable until 2009, after which it rose sharply, reaching a peak of 3 Linking Words
billion
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dollars
in 2011. Use synonyms
Similarly
, donations from Linking Words
Organization
C started at 1.5 Use synonyms
billion
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dollars
and increased steadily before dropping sharply to just under 1.5 Use synonyms
billion
. By the end of the period, it returned to its initial level.
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In contrast
, the donations from Linking Words
organization
A were approximately 0.5 Use synonyms
billion
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dollars
in 2008, rising moderately to 1 Use synonyms
billion
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dollars
by 2011. Meanwhile, institution D contributed about 0.5 Use synonyms
billion
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dollars
in 2008, but its donations experienced minor fluctuations, reaching their lowest point of around 0.3 Use synonyms
billion
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dollars
in 2011.Use synonyms
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