The graph below shows the monetary aid from four organizations to developing countries between 2008 and 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the monetary aid from four organizations to developing countries between 2008 and 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the financial aid donated by four organizations to improve facilities in various countries over a three-year period, from 2008 to 2011, measured in billions of
dollars
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.
Overall
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, aid from organizations A and B increased, with institution A recording the highest figure throughout the period.
In contrast
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, allowance from
organization
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D saw a moderate decline over
this
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timeframe. In 2008, the monetary aid provided by
Organization
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B was exactly 1.5
billion
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dollars
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.
This
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figure remained stable until 2009, after which it rose sharply, reaching a peak of 3
billion
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dollars
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in 2011.
Similarly
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, donations from
Organization
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C started at 1.5
billion
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dollars
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and increased steadily before dropping sharply to just under 1.5
billion
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. By the end of the period, it returned to its initial level.
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, the donations from
organization
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A were approximately 0.5
billion
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dollars
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in 2008, rising moderately to 1
billion
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dollars
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by 2011. Meanwhile, institution D contributed about 0.5
billion
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dollars
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in 2008, but its donations experienced minor fluctuations, reaching their lowest point of around 0.3
billion
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dollars
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in 2011.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in contrast".
Vocabulary: Replace the words dollars, organization, billion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "moderate" was used 2 times.
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