You have a friend who has always liked the car you currently drive. Now you have decided to sell the car. You think your friend might be interested in buying it. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter, say why you want to sell your car describe the condition of the car invite the friend to come and see the car himself/herself someday Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sam,
Hope
this
letter finds you in good spirits and health. Recently Linking Words
i
made the decision to sell my car.
Nowadays, I started to use public transport to travel. There are a number of reasons for it but the main reason is that I am trying to save some money for study. So I remember that you always liked my so Change the capitalization
I
i
wanted to know if you are interested in buying it.
It is a 2015 Honda Civic in very good condition as you know. Change the capitalization
I
Moreover
, all the parts and even the paint of the car Linking Words
is
original. There is no major issue in it but there are some mild scratches on it. Let me know what you think about it.
We can set a meeting if you have any concerns about the car.
Correct subject-verb agreement
are
yours
ram.Correct the word
your
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task response
Ensure consistent use of capitalization, especially for proper nouns, like 'I' instead of 'i', and 'Yours' instead of 'yours'.
task response
Consider providing more detailed information or examples to support your reasons for selling the car. It may give a more complete understanding to the reader.
coherence and cohesion
Try to link your ideas more clearly to enhance the logical flow from one paragraph to another.
coherence and cohesion
Consider breaking down your ideas into separate paragraphs for clarity, such as a paragraph each for the reason for selling, car condition, and invitation.
coherence and cohesion
The greeting and closing in your letter are appropriately used, setting a friendly and personal tone.
task achievement
The writing tone is appropriate for addressing a friend; it's informal yet clear.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,