You are planning a surprise birthday party for a friend and need some help organizing it. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter: Explain why you are writing. - To inform about surprise party for Dhruvi, Give details about the party. - Surprise party will be at midnight of 29 march at her place, will be accompanied by many of our friends and her family Suggest how your friend can help. - Could help in organizing food as well as Helping with decorations.

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Dear Dhruvi, I hope that you are doing well and enjoying your life to the fullest. I am writing to inform you about something very

speacial

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special

that I am planning to do in the near future and to ask if you could help me with

few

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things to make it happen. Drum-rolls please!

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I have decided to surprise

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Dhruvi for her birthday

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year.

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this

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will be a surprise party for her, I would like to invite you to the party

along with

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all our friends and her family. I am planning to surprise her at the midnight of 29th of the March with

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ceremony. And

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that there will be food, deserts and a party floor for everyone to enjoy.

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, I am really hoping that

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you could help me

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the food and

desert

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dessert

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menu that everyone will enjoy.

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that, though

the decorations theme

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the theme of the decoration

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is already confirmed,

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I was wondering if you could give me a hand in decorating her guest room, that

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be much appreciated. Please let me know if you have any suggestions that will make Dhruvi's birthday unforgettable. Thanks for your help in advance. Love, Ruchin Patel

Submitted by ruchin27 on Mon Dec 23 2024

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Spelling

Ensure there are no spelling errors like 'speacial', consider using 'special'.

Audience Clarification

Be explicit about who the letter is addressed to; It seems confusing that you address Dhruvi in the salutation when she is the guest of honor.

Clarity

The letter clearly explains the purpose and gives specific details about the party.

Tone

The tone is friendly and appropriate for writing to a friend about a party.

Structure

The letter is structured well with a proper greeting and closing.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

10 paragraphs

200 words

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