The line graph shows male and female gym membership over a thirty-year period. The vertical axis represents the number of members in units of 1000. The horizontal axis represents the period from 1980 to 2010
The data presents male and female gym membership between 1980 to 2010.
Overall
, males registered for the gym more than females throughout the given period. Linking Words
However
, the Linking Words
number
of male Use synonyms
members
fluctuated compared to women which shows a very stable graph.
In 1980, the Use synonyms
number
of male Use synonyms
members
was 2000, which significantly rose over 5 Use synonyms
years
and reached 4000 in 1985. But the Use synonyms
number
of male Use synonyms
members
started to decrease and after 10 Use synonyms
years
of falling, it reached just below 2000, in Use synonyms
this
period female Linking Words
members
outran the male Use synonyms
members
. After 5 Use synonyms
years
hitting the lowest Use synonyms
number
, the Use synonyms
number
of male Use synonyms
members
dramatically increased till 2005, reaching the highest pick in the graph. But unfortunately, it declined very fast reaching lower than approximately 1000.
In the case of women, the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
members
was 1000 in 1980 and it rose steadily till 1985. From 1985 to 1990 the gym maintained a Use synonyms
number
of women Use synonyms
members
. But the Use synonyms
number
started to grow very high and reached a peak in 1995, which was just below 3000. After reaching the highest pick it had little ups and downs several times for the next 10 Use synonyms
years
. but still, it shows a very stable graph compared to male Use synonyms
members
Use synonyms
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