The map below shows two potential locations for a shopping mall in the city of Brandfield. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
A glance at the map provided reveals duble possible locations for a shopping mall in the city of Brandfield.
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, one particularly interesting fact highlighted by the figure is that both locations have access to the railway Linking Words
as well as
the road but S2 is closer to transport systems than the other.
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According to
what is shown, a virtue of S1 is that the place has the lowest path to the housing estate in the west-north than the other one. In stark contrast, s2 has the closest way to reach to industrial estate toward east-north. Linking Words
Furthermore
, the city Linking Words
center
has been placed relatively in the Change the spelling
centre
center
of the map. Change the spelling
centre
Moreover
, the golf course has been created in the east of the map. Linking Words
In addition
, the river begins from north toward westsouth and Linking Words
also
it crosses through the city Linking Words
center
.
It is Change the spelling
centre
also
interesting to note that S1 has access to the river toward the east. Linking Words
In contrast
, S2 has no access to the river.Linking Words
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