The map below shows two potential locations for a shopping mall in the city of Brandfield. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows two potential locations for a shopping mall in the city of Brandfield.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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A glance at the map provided reveals duble possible locations for a shopping mall in the city of Brandfield.
Overall
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, one particularly interesting fact highlighted by the figure is that both locations have access to the railway
as well as
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the road but S2 is closer to transport systems than the other.
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what is shown, a virtue of S1 is that the place has the lowest path to the housing estate in the west-north than the other one. In stark contrast, s2 has the closest way to reach to industrial estate toward east-north.
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, the city
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has been placed relatively in the
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of the map.
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, the golf course has been created in the east of the map.
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, the river begins from north toward westsouth and
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it crosses through the city
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. It is
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interesting to note that S1 has access to the river toward the east.
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, S2 has no access to the river.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • shopping mall
  • city center
  • suburbs
  • accessibility
  • public transportation
  • congestion
  • local businesses
  • economic impact
  • environmental considerations
  • infrastructure
  • urban planning
  • development
  • consumer behavior
  • green spaces
  • residential area
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