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The map below give information about the university sport court in 1990 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below give information about the university sport court in 1990 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The
given
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map below illustrates the differences between
unversity
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university
sport court
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sports courts
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 during the period from 1990 until the present. It is
clearly
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 that, there are some modifications that have occurred recently. Some places
removed
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were removed
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 and others changed their locations. Both
cafe
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the cafe
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 and reception remained in the same place. They did not
changed
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.
To begin
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 with, The park in the northwest of
area
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the area
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 was replaced by
basketball
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the basketball
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 court. The tees around the park
cut
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were cut
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 down.
Also
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, Adding two more tennis
court
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courts
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 for the old building and changed it into the southwest.
Car
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The car
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 park was disappeared. The place of cafe and reception
still
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are still
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 at the same location. They
situated
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are situated
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 in the north of the map.
Moreover
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,
outdoor
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the outdoor
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 pool
removed
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was removed
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 and replaced by
outdoor
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the outdoor
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 pool. Outdoor
poor
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pool
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 located in the northeast of the university.
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, the changing room was in the
center
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centre
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 of the place. Now it
located
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is located
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 in the south of the area next to
fitness
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the fitness
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 center.
Fitness
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The fitness
A fitness
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 center is a new building which is added recently.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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