The map below give information about the university sport court in 1990 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The
given
map below illustrates the differences between Verb problem
apply
unversity
Correct your spelling
university
sport court
during the period from 1990 until the present. It is Fix the agreement mistake
sports courts
clearly
that, there are some modifications that have occurred recently. Some places Change the word
clear
removed
and others changed their locations.
Both Add a missing verb
were removed
cafe
and reception remained in the same place. They did not Correct article usage
the cafe
changed
.
Change the verb form
change
To begin
with, The park in the northwest of Linking Words
area
was replaced by Add an article
the area
basketball
court. The tees around the park Add an article
the basketball
a basketball
cut
down. Add a missing verb
were cut
Also
, Adding two more tennis Linking Words
court
for the old building and changed it into the southwest. Fix the agreement mistake
courts
Car
park was disappeared. The place of cafe and reception Add an article
The car
still
at the same location. They Add a missing verb
are still
situated
in the north of the map.
Add a missing verb
are situated
Moreover
, Linking Words
outdoor
pool Correct article usage
the outdoor
removed
and replaced by Add a missing verb
was removed
outdoor
pool. Outdoor Add an article
the outdoor
poor
located in the northeast of the university. Correct your spelling
pool
In addition
, the changing room was in the Linking Words
center
of the place. Now it Change the spelling
centre
located
in the south of the area next to Add a missing verb
is located
fitness
center. Add an article
the fitness
a fitness
Fitness
center is a new building which is added recently.Add an article
The fitness
A fitness
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