The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.

The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.
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The diagram gives information on the
process
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distribution of
bricks
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for the building industry.
Overall
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, there are seven stages in the
process
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, beginning with digging up the
clay
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until to ready for delivery.
To begin
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with, dig up the
clay
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from the ground with the truck and
then
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the clays will be put in the metal grid which
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the
clay
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into smaller pieces. The smaller
clay
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is transferred with roller machines. The
next,
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the
clay
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will mixed with sand and water. There are two stages with wire cutter
process
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and the moulding
process
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, both of which will result in a brick. Next step, the
bricks
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will be dried in the
oven
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for around 24-48
hours
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. After 48
hours
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, the temperature of the
oven
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will be set in two steps.
Firstly
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, the
oven
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will be set at 200-980 Celcius and the
bricks
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will be placed in the kiln. After that, the
oven
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will be set at a high temperature of around 870-1300 Celcius.
Then
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, the brick into the cooling chamber for around 48-72
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. After 72
hours
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the
bricks
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are ready to be packaged before being delivered to another country.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words process, bricks, clay, oven, hours with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "set" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • diagram
  • manufacture
  • bricks
  • building industry
  • process
  • dig
  • prepare
  • clay
  • mold
  • shape
  • dry
  • fire
  • kiln
  • cool
  • package
  • fired
  • overview
  • importance
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