The graph below shows information about the kinds of food that teenagers in Australia enjoyed eating. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows information about the kinds of food that teenagers in Australia enjoyed eating. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates how much junk food was consumed by Australian teenagers throughout 1975 - 2000.
Overall
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, there were 3 types of meals registered in
this
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state. To start with, at the beginning of the period, fish and chips were highly popular, reaching a historical maximum of 100
times
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per year.
However
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, their rates collapsed after 1985, decreasing to less than 40 in 2000.
On the other hand
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, other types of fast food started to gain popularity among teenagers. Both pizzas and hamburgers have continuously risen from about 10
times
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consumed to more than 80
times
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annually. Interestingly, a sharp increase happened the same year when fish and chips rates became lower.
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, burgers were always more appealing to Australian teens.
For instance
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, they were chosen almost 20
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per year more frequently.
To sum up
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, throughout the timeline, the demand for snacks has fallen,
whereas
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for other types of junk food, on the opposite, has risen.
Furthermore
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, hamburgers were put in first place in the end, followed by a famous Italian meal.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words times with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • preference
  • frequency
  • trend
  • popularity
  • notably
  • anomaly
  • dominant
  • contrast
  • exhibit
  • proportion
  • category
  • significant
  • rate
  • margin
  • predominant
  • marginally
  • substantial
  • consistent
  • overall
  • variety
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