The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the outgoing costs of citizens in two countries,
called
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apply
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France
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,
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and, UK
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UK
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on
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, on
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customer items in the year 2010. As can be seen from the graph, the money spent on cars
of
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by
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British and French residents was the highest.
In contrast
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, the spending on perfume of British and cameras of French was the lowest. Looking at the graph from a more detailed perspective, the car expenses of people in the
UK
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spent on 40 thousands of pounds,
while
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the French who spent 400,000 pounds.
Similarly
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, the expenditures of
UK
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residents on books stood at over 400,000 pounds, which was 100,00 higher than the remaining country.
Next,
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in the
UK
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spending
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, spending
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on cameras
occupied
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was
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over 350,000, which was 200,000 higher than
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France
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in France
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.
On the other hand
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, the amount spent on remaining goods higher in
France
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. Over 350,000
of
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French
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France
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residents spent on computers, which was slightly more than
British
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the British
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. And both countries outgoing costs perfume with the lowest cost to around 200,000 in
France
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and near 150,000 in
UK
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words france, uk with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
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