The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
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These graphs depict the altar in electrical house
machines
owners and the amount of time they spent weekly from 1920 to 2019.
Fix the agreement mistake
machine
Overall
, the proportion of owing electrical devices increased differently throw the given period, Linking Words
while
the time spent continued to decrease.
vacuums started to rapidly grow from 30 in 1920, reaching 50 in 1940. Linking Words
Whereas
the refrigerators rocketed from the bottom to exceed the vacuum by little in 1940, Linking Words
Then
it jumped more reaching the top in 1980 and Linking Words
stay
at the highest level for the remaining time. Back to the vacuums after Wrong verb form
staying
1940
it continued to Add a comma
1940,
rose
significantly until it reached 100 Wrong verb form
rise
percent
in 2000 Change the spelling
per cent
then
steady at Linking Words
this
level for the next years.
Washing machines climbed fastly from 40 in 1920 to almost 70 in 1960, after that Linking Words
it
went down slowly below 70 in 1980. Correct pronoun usage
they
Then
it grew gradually exceeding 70 in the final year. Linking Words
However
, throw these years the spent Linking Words
hours
per week fell considerably from 50 Use synonyms
hours
per Use synonyms
weak
in 1920 to 20 Correct your spelling
week
hours
in 1960. From 1960 to 2019 the number fluctuated between 20 to 10 Use synonyms
hours
per Use synonyms
weak
.Correct your spelling
week
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours with synonyms.
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