It is important for everyone, including young people, to save money for their future. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, with the world evolving, many
people
starting Use synonyms
worry
about their futures. Fix the infinitive
to worry
Therefore
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they
believe that saving Correct pronoun usage
some
money
to use in Use synonyms
future
is necessary, Use synonyms
while
others disagree. I personally advocate the latter group. In Linking Words
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will discuss both perspectives.
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money
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be considered
into
some views. These days, many Change preposition
in
people
around the world are experiencing economic problems Use synonyms
due to
political decisions, which makes Linking Words
people
nervous. Following Use synonyms
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apply
this
, they Linking Words
saving
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save
money
to be ready for the worst situations. There is Use synonyms
moreover
another belief that we should always prepare if anything Linking Words
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happens
For example
, someone may get an illness which costs a lot to heal, so by saving Linking Words
money
he/she could be able to pay for his/her health.
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On the other hand
, there are opponents who disagree with saving Linking Words
money
. In their view, we are not aware of our life length and we should live our best during Use synonyms
this
time. Linking Words
In other words
, we should spend all of our Linking Words
money
on anything that we desire and stop being Use synonyms
worry
about the Wrong verb form
worried
future
because we may die before using the Use synonyms
money
we save. Use synonyms
Additionally
, the value of Linking Words
money
is dropping and there is a probability that Use synonyms
money
will not exist in the Use synonyms
future
. So, there is no point in saving Use synonyms
money
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However
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people
can invest their Use synonyms
money
in something else. Use synonyms
For instance
, they can buy a villa near the sea. Linking Words
Thus
, they can enjoy life and Linking Words
also
will be able to use that as an investment in the Linking Words
future
.
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To conclude
, saving Linking Words
money
can help Use synonyms
people
in difficult situations like a health problem or an economic crisis Use synonyms
while
life is too short to be anxious about the Linking Words
future
and Use synonyms
people
can use their Use synonyms
money
to enjoy their time. As I mentioned before, I disagree with saving Use synonyms
money
and I believe we should be less anxious about the Use synonyms
future
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Use transition words and phrases to enhance the logical flow between paragraphs and ideas within a paragraph.
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Provide more concrete and diverse examples to support your points, particularly in the section discussing the benefits of saving money.
coherence cohesion
The essay presents a clear introduction and conclusion, effectively framing the discussion.
task achievement
Both perspectives on saving money are discussed, providing a balanced view.
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The essay addresses the prompt and develops a substantial response to the topic.