The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea, buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

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The given bar chart provides information about the types of beverages purchased as part of drinking habits in five Australian cities over the past four weeks.

Overall

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it is clear that

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visiting a café for

coffee

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or tea was the most popular habitat in all cities,

while

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the number of residents buying fresh

coffee

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was significantly lower. The lowest rate of fresh

coffee

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buyers

were

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in Brisbane and Adelaide, at 34% each. Approximately 45% were recorded in Sydney, and 43% in Melbourne.

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percentage in Hobart was slightly lower, at 37%.Regarding instant

coffee

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, there was a small gap between Brisbane and Adelaide, at 54% and 50%, respectively.

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this

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percentage was considerably high in Hobart, at 55%.

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, the most popular habitat was going to a café for

coffee

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or tea. Melbourne and Hobart experienced the same percentages reaching 64%,

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Sydney mirrored

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percentage at 62%.

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is in stark contrast to Adelaide and Brisbane, which experienced a drop (50% and 55%, respectively).

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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

164 words

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survey results
coffee and tea buying habits
instant coffee
fresh coffee
cafe culture
social influences
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city demographics
seasonal trends
marketing strategies
consumer preferences
availability
popularity
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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea, buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

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