The pie graphs show greenhouse gas emissions worldwide in 2002 and the forecast for 2030. The column chart shows carbon dioxide emissions around the world.

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illustrates greenhouse gas emissions worldwide in 2002 and the forecast for 2030,

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shows carbon dioxide emissions around the world.

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, the graph shows five categories in the different experiences in the same period, Despite

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, it is crystal clear that, in column three in the pie

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the highest is 2030 in industry and OCED,

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the lowest present is transverse economics and

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. As the pie

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shows in 2002 in transition economics it

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10%

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will be decreased by 1% in 2030.

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in the developing countries in 2002 has been 38%

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will be increased by 10%,

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OCED in 2002 was higher than in 2030 by 11%. What's more in the column in all categories 2030 will be higher than 2002, especially in the industry 2030 was 10 but in 2002 just 6 billion ions even the consumers in both years at 2030 will be 8 and in 2002 decreased to 4 billion. In conclusion, all the information was easy to read and compare with it, all in all, 2030 will be the highest expert in transition economics.