The chart below shows the percentage of a drug company's total sales, by region, from 2002 to 2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage of a drug company's total sales, by region, from 2002 to 2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given chart illustrates the proportion of drug company's sales between 2002 and 2006.
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, it is clearly seen that
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Asia experienced an upward trend,
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America and Europe experienced a downward trend. In detail, the percentage of Asia started at 25%
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and increased gradually to 35% over the next 2 years.The figure climbed merely to 37% in 2005, and
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slightly to 40% in the final year. Turning to the figure for America
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at 41%, and decreased significantly to 27% from 2002 to 2004.
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, the proportion escalated dramatically to 30% in 2006.In the case of Europe, started at 35%, and jumped steadily to 38% in 2004.After that, the figure
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rapidly to 30% in the final year.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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