The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the levels of
production
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from the main sources of fuel in the United Kingdom covering from 1981 to 2000.
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Petroleum
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had
consistenly
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consistently
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became
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the
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highest produced
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fuel throughout those years. At
start
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,
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petroleum
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production
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had
increase
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from 90
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unit
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units
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in 1981 to 140
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in 1984 until it became stable for the next 4 years. The
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then
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had fallen
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to 100
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unit
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in 1990. After the fall, the figure steadily increased and back to its highest point in 2000 with
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the production
of 140
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unit
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units
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. Different from
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petroleum
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production
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, the
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of coal had experienced a declining trend. In 1981, the coal
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made a total
around
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80
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unit
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before it
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significantly to a level of just below 40
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unit
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in 1984. The figure
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rose back to 60
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unit
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in 1986 and
then
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had experiencing
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a steady decline until 2000 with
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just
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around 35
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unit
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.
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coal had
decline
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declined
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,
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natural gas
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had
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trend and
then
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closing
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closed
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its gap with
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petroleum
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production
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. Starting with just below 40
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unit
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units
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of
production
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in 1981,
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natural gas
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surpassed the number of coal
at
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in
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1992 with
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figures of around 50
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unit
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units
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. The number
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persist
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to
rose
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until it reached 100
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unit
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units
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of
production
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in 2000.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words production, petroleum, unit with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just below" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • production levels
  • fuel types
  • trend
  • fluctuating
  • dominant
  • period
  • rise
  • decline
  • context
  • spikes
  • drops
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