The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the levels of
production
from the main sources of fuel in the United Kingdom covering from 1981 to 2000. Use synonyms
Overall
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Petroleum
had Use synonyms
consistenly
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consistently
consistency
became
the Wrong verb form
become
most
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highest produced
fuel throughout those years.
At Add a hyphen
highest-produced
start
, Add an article
the start
the
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petroleum
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production
had Use synonyms
increase
from 90 Change the verb form
increased
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unit
in 1981 to 140 Fix the agreement mistake
units
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unit
in 1984 until it became stable for the next 4 years. The Fix the agreement mistake
units
production
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then
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had fallen
to 100 Wrong verb form
fell
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unit
in 1990. After the fall, the figure steadily increased and back to its highest point in 2000 with Fix the agreement mistake
units
theproduction
of 140 Correct your spelling
the production
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unit
.
Different from Fix the agreement mistake
units
the
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petroleum
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production
, the Use synonyms
production
of coal had experienced a declining trend. In 1981, the coal Use synonyms
production
made a total Use synonyms
around
80 Change preposition
of around
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unit
before it Fix the agreement mistake
units
falls
significantly to a level of just below 40 Wrong verb form
fell
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unit
in 1984. The figure Fix the agreement mistake
units
then
rose back to 60 Linking Words
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unit
in 1986 and Fix the agreement mistake
units
then
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had experiencing
a steady decline until 2000 with Wrong verb form
experienced
production
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just
around 35 Change preposition
of just
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unit
.
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units
While
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the
coal had Correct article usage
apply
decline
, Change the verb form
declined
the
natural gas Correct article usage
apply
production
had Use synonyms
uprise
trend and Replace the word
a rising
then
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closing
its gap with Wrong verb form
closed
the
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apply
petroleum
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production
. Starting with just below 40 Use synonyms
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unit
of Fix the agreement mistake
units
production
in 1981, Use synonyms
the
natural gas Correct article usage
apply
had
surpassed the number of coal Unnecessary verb
apply
at
1992 with Change preposition
in
the
figures of around 50 Correct article usage
apply
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unit
. The number Fix the agreement mistake
units
then
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persist
to Wrong verb form
persisted
rose
until it reached 100 Wrong verb form
rise
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unit
of Fix the agreement mistake
units
production
in 2000.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, petroleum, unit with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just below" was used 2 times.
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