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The maps below show a town centre in 1990 and the same town centre today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show a town centre in 1990 and the same town centre today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps illustrate the differences between a
town
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 centre in 1990 and its development today.
Overall
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, only several parts of the
town
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 in the north and south areas have altered construction with additional facilities for pedestrians,
while
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 the rest of the place remains unchanged. In 1990, several shop blocks were located
in
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at
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 the top north of
map
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the map
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 near
to
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apply
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the left side, alongside children in the same area. The centre of the
town
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 was divided into three sections: a park near Newton
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street
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Street
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, a
town
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 hall on the right side near Oldfield
Street
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, and a library situated between these two.
Additionally
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, a residential area with houses was located in the south on Green
Street
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. In the new development, the shop blocks have been replaced by a shopping mall,
while
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childcare
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the childcare
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 centre remains in the same location.
Although
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 the central areas and two banks remained in their original positions, zebra crossings have been added at two locations: between the bank and the
town
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 hall, and on the Green
Street
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 in front of the
town
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 hall.
Furthermore
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, the houses
was
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were
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 replaced by apartment blocks,
while
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 Smith
Street
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 which was previously open to
vehicle
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vehicles
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, currently have been converted into a pedestrian-only zone.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words town, street with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remains" was used 3 times.
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