The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
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The tables show the total
sales
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of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas across five European countries in 1999 and 2004. The data was measured in millions of
euros
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.
Overall
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, it can be seen that there was an increase in total
sales
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of coffee in the
last
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year, Switzerland had the highest amount of sold coffees, followed by Denmark. Meanwhile, Belgium and Sweden were the lowest.
Furthermore
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, the UK marketed more banana fruits compared to other European countries. In 1999, Switzerland earned 3
million
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euros
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from selling coffee,
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it rose two times in 2004 to 6
million
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euros
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In contrast
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, the total
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of the UK were only 1.5 and drastically increased to 20
million
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euro in 2004. Looking at the average
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of banana fruit, the UK earned more from bananas with 15
million
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euros
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and increased more than double in 2004 to 47
million
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euros
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. Meanwhile, Switzerland's income from banana fruit started at 1
million
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and rose to 5.5 in 2004
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Belgium's
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were only less than a
million
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and increased in 2004 to 4
million
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Additionally
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, Denmark's average
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declined to 0.9% from 2 in 1999.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, euros, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade sales
  • significant growth
  • trends and patterns
  • market expansion
  • sustainable consumption
  • ethical products
  • consumer awareness
  • economic impact
  • percentage increase
  • market share
  • profit margins
  • trade initiatives
  • consumer behavior
  • retail figures
  • economic indicators
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