The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie charts below

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the online line shopping sales for

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sector between 2003 and 2013 in New

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, the 2003 chart shows that the

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of the revenue in the sector came from travel and books with 36% and 19%, followed by clothes and film or music stores with 24% and 21%.

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33%, travel 29%, books 22% and clothes 16%. After taking all the details, we

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conclude that the statistics have changed over the years, because from 2003 to 2016

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music and movies have increased

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sales on the online market

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29 and 22%, and it has been the same case for books and travel, that has increased its revenue at 22 and 29.

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, the only category that has decreased is

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the clothing sector, because in ten years the percentage has fallen

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