You have a complaint about the hotel you stayed at while attending a meeting that was booked by the organizer of a company meeting. Write a letter to the organizer of the meeting and include: -Details about the meeting -The problem you face -What should be done

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Dear Sir, I hope

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letter finds you well. My name is Maninder Singh and I am head of

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India Dental Suppliers Association. I am writing

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letter to express my dissatisfaction with the hotel that you booked for the annual event. First of all, I would like to congratulate you

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success of the annual meeting, which was focused on the future road map of

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Shofu India.

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, the information that speakers gave about the product line was

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very informative and interesting.

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, the venue that you selected for

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event was not up to mark there were a few issues which I faced during my stay.

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, the room in which I stayed was untidy and inhabitable, as

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was torn and there was dirt all around. What is more, food quality was

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substandard, the food I ordered was not fresh and

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was stale. I kindly request you to write about

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to the hotel manager and ask for

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clarification, because

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act has tarnished your company's image.

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should not happen in future with anyone else. I hope you will look into the matter personally and I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Jatinder.

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Consider including more specific details about the meeting location and dates for a complete response.

coherence cohesion

Clarify the sequence of events leading to the complaint to enhance logical flow.

coherence cohesion

The letter includes a clear and polite greeting and closing, adhering to formal letter-writing conventions.

task achievement

The tone is professional and polite, suitable for addressing an organizer about a complaint.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

206 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

accommodation
dissatisfied
inconvenience
address the issue
compensatory measures
management
remedy
productive
experience
participation
amenities
unhelpful
conditions
remediation
ensure
comfortable
arrangement
foreseeable future
retrieve
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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