The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.

The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.
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The bar chart compares data about the fraction of people who travelled by 4 various namely, train, car, tube, and bus from or commute to work in a European city from 1960 to 2000.
Overall
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, it was important that the proportion of using trani and cars increased over the period of 4 decades.
According to
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the diagram, the bus, the most popular transit among the population in 1960, hit nearly 37% in 1960;
then
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it reduced overwhelmingly to 15% in 2000.
In addition
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, the tube scored nearly a quarter in 1960, after that, it declined moderately to the minimum mark of just over 20% in 1960;
however
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, it rose slightly to 25% in 2000. The graph demonstrates that train recorded approximately 18% in the beginning;
thereafter
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, it climbed somewhat and reached the vertex at roughly 27%;
nevertheless
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, it dropped to almost 22% in 2000.
Although
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, cars' passengers touched nearly 6% in 1960;
then
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they leapt enormously to roughly 36%, the first one in 2000.

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