Your friend just had a baby. You decided to prepare a present for them. Write a letter and say : 1. Congratulate your friend 2. Ask when would be possible for you to visit 3. Ask what present they would like.
DEAR PRIYANKA,
I hope you are doing great and
everthing's
going Correct your spelling
everything's
good
on your end!I just thought Change the word
well
i'd
take a moment to update you a Change the capitalization
I'd
bit-its
Pooja here ,the lawyer you know from Anna Nager Correct your spelling
bit
west
,Capitalize word
West
chennai
.I am glad and happy that you are Change the capitalization
Chennai
bleassed
with twin babies ,my heart Correct your spelling
blessed
pleased
felt
Wrong verb form
feels
congragulations
.
Correct your spelling
congratulations
Its
been 12 years since we Replace the word
It's
It is
have
met,i Unnecessary verb
apply
could
recollect all ourWrong verb form
can
chidhood
memories and Correct your spelling
childhood
also
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its
cherishable Replace the word
it's
it is
one
.Kindly let me know Correct pronoun usage
ones
your
convenient time to visit you and your babies.I would send my telephone no.so that you can contact me.
As a Change the word
a
friend
Add a comma
friend,
i
know your likes and don'ts,Change the capitalization
I
based
on that Correct word choice
and based
i
have bought some small gifts for those little bunnies and for you. Change the capitalization
I
i
am eagerly awaiting to see you and your family members.
I hope you Change the capitalization
I
would
reply Wrong verb form
will
for
Change preposition
to
this
letter.
Thanking You
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General
Pay attention to accurate spellings of words such as 'congratulations' and 'blessed'.
Suitable Writing Tone
Ensure consistency in tone, e.g. starting with informal greeting but using more formal expressions later.
Task Achievement
The letter includes all required elements: congratulations, a query about visiting, and a question about gift preference.
Coherence and Cohesion
The greeting and closing of the letter are well-developed and appropriate for personal correspondence.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,