The graph below gives information on the differences in clothing exports from three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information on the differences in clothing exports from three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line chart compares data about how much money per million dollars 3 various countries namely,
Colombia
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,
Japan
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, and Myanmar received from exporting clothes between 1999 and 2003.
Overall
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, it was important that the trends of all countries other than
Japan
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increased over the period of 4 years.
According to
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the diagram,
Japan
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, the main country that had the highest amount of money from exporting clothes among countries in 1999, hit roughly 570 in the beginning;
then
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it reduced to just under 550, nearly the same as
Colombia
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, in 2000;
however
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, it rose slightly and reached the vertex at 600 in 2001;
nevertheless
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, it declined moderately to approximately 500 in 2003. The graph demonstrates that the fashions of
Colombia
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and Myanmar were
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to
Japan
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owing to the fact that
Colombia
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, the second one, scored almost 450 in 1999; thin it climbed somewhat and recorded the maximum mark at 700 in 2002;
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, it dropped marginally to just over 600 in 2003.
In addition
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, Myanmar reported just over Zero at the start;
thereafter
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, it leapt overwhelmingly and peaked at nearly 950 in 2001. Later it dipped significantly to 350 in 2002, but it grew to nearly 450 in 2003.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words colombia, japan with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
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