The diagram below shows the life cycle of a Honey bee.

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A glance at the diagram provided reveals the life stages of the

honey

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bee.

Overall

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, one particularly

interesing

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interesting

fact highlighted by the figure is that the period of a total cycle is 34-36

days

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According to

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what is shown,

firstly

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, females lay 1 or 2 eggs every three

days

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. In the second stage, it is

also

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intersting

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interesting

to note that eggs hatch after 9-10

days

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. In the third stage, after five

days

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the

honey

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bee is so tiny and

then

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grows rapidly over 9

days

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and now young adults emerge.

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also

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noteworthy the fact is that young adults grow after 4

days

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and now they are mature.

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, it is reasonable to summarise that the

honey

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bee will be able to create

honey

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after 34-36

days

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easily. it is so

importants

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important

for farmers that consider

time

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the time

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of the cycle in order to

product

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produce

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the best

honey

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and

also

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prohibit the damage to bees.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words honey, days with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

154 words

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The diagram below shows the life cycle of a Honey bee.

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