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coherence
Try to focus on improving the coherence and cohesion of your essay by organizing your points more logically. Ensure that each paragraph flows from one to the next, particularly when moving from one idea to another.
task achievement
While your essay touches on important points, it would benefit from a more detailed exploration of each point with supporting examples. Try to provide specific examples that clearly illustrate your view.
introduction
You have clearly stated your opinion in the introduction, which sets the stage for your essay.
conclusion
Your conclusion effectively summarizes your main points, reinforcing your stance on the topic.
Word Count
IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.
A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.
Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.