Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best way to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In recent years, debate sparked regarding what is better

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some argue

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efficient to start

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training early, others suggest that pursuing academic studies is more profitable

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the long term.

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essay will discuss both views before giving my own stance regarding

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agree with higher education being

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. On one hand, the

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of getting into the professional field right after graduation from

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argue that it saves time from years of superior studies, especially if the graduate already has a clear idea about his future.

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of

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workers, regret not diving into vocational training right after school, as not only that would have saved them an

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amount of money in student loans, but

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made them actually

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valuable income at the time and

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financial

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independence

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result in them gaining and acquiring

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experience in their respective fields. On the other

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, the opponents assert that not all professions can be started with basic knowledge from

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.

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careers are very demanding academically and need years of

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learning before

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said careers. A case in point

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medecine

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medicine

and law.

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argue that knowledge is a bottomless pit, with countless updates and despite being

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in a profession, the best

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to progress and get

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is to show not only experience but

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deep and critical knowledge in the field.

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confirming that

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academic training is capital and pivotal to growth professionally, before and after entering the job market, even if it can be a burden financially. In conclusion, both sides present valid arguments; and

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can see pros and cons in both, from my perspective,

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believe that it is better to

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pursue

academic studies especially if you have the financial means, and the energy to do so.