There are many people who go to live in different countries. To what extent should people be allowed to move freely between countries and live where they choose? What are the benefits and drawbacks of this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Many people try to live in a lot of countries over their lives, but what are the advantages and disadvantages of

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I will give my personal opinion.

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your own country can have many flaws.

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, you will leave all your family and friends, and you are moving away from the place where you grew up.

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going to a new country which is going to have another culture, climate or atmosphere.

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, it is not an easy decision to make, you will have to accept that you will be alone in another part of the world where nobody knows you, and that means that you will have to confront all the challenges

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many good things about moving to another nation.

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, you will have the opportunity to have new experiences, and that involves getting to know new cultures, people, jobs or having problems that are out of your knowledge. In my experience, I moved to Spain when I was 20 years old, and it has been one of the best decisions that I have ever made

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because it has allowed me to get to know a part of the world that I did not

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about, and that has made me more cultivated. In conclusion, moving to another country is not an easy choice, but if you have the opportunity to do it, I would

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do it. You will have experiences that you might never have in your life, and for sure you will learn from them.

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Try to provide a balanced view on both sides of the argument regarding the free movement of people between countries, rather than focusing solely on personal experience.

coherence cohesion

Ensure all main points are logically connected and supported with relevant examples.

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Consider expanding on the drawbacks and benefits with more detailed examples and explanations.

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The essay effectively introduces the topic and provides a clear conclusion with a personal opinion.

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Personal experience is used effectively to illustrate the benefits of moving to another country.

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Logical progression of ideas from challenges to benefits of moving, helping to enhance the essay's flow.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 5.0

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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