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30 DEC---The charts below give information about the number of hours that students study each day at five different universities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

30 DEC---The charts below give information about the number of hours that students study each day at five different universities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar charts depict the total
hours
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 spent by
students
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 on weekdays and weekends studying at five different universities.
Overall
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, it can be seen that
students
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 in all universities studied for more than 9
hours
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 per day on weekdays,
while
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 on weekends, the range of study
hours
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 varied more widely. Regarding the
weekdays
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 graph,
students
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 at
University
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 C spent 10.6
hours
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 on education, which was just 6 minutes and 36 minutes more than those at Institute B (
10.1hours
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10.1 hours
) and Institute E (10
hours
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), respectively.
Moreover
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, the two remaining colleges exhibited a narrow gap, with the total
hours
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 of those studied in
University
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 A marginally higher at 9.8 compared to
University
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 D's 9.6
hours
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. As for weekend study
hours
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,
students
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 at
University
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 A led with 9
hours
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, trailed by
University
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 B and C at 8.6 for the former and 7.8 for the latter.
On the other hand
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, the total
hours
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 spent by those in
University
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 D recorded the longest decrease to 5.6,
while
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 that of
University
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 E dropped by 3.8 to 6.2
hours
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, students, university with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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