The table shows information about department stores and online stores in Australia in 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given table compares data about the number of 4 various items,
such
as the figure of business, profit, sales revenue and growth for both the Linking Words
department
and Online Use synonyms
stores
in Australia in 2011.
Use synonyms
Overall
, it was important that the all factors for the Linking Words
Onlion
Use synonyms
stores
were more than the Use synonyms
department
's ones in that year Use synonyms
while
the number of Linking Words
Department
Use synonyms
stores
was lower, they had more Profit and sales.
Use synonyms
According to
the diagram, the number of businesses that worked in 2 different sections for Linking Words
Onlion
Store formed 368, but for the Use synonyms
Department
was just 67. Profit made up 807 for the Use synonyms
Department
store and Use synonyms
Onlion
composed roughly 60 more than the Use synonyms
Department
.
The graph demonstrates that like Sales Revenue was the same as in prior sections on account of the fact that Use synonyms
Onlion
constituted 13,400 and reported approximately 1000 more than the Use synonyms
Department
. Use synonyms
In addition
, The growth of the Linking Words
Onlion
Use synonyms
stores
was 6%; Use synonyms
whereas
, For the Linking Words
department
, Use synonyms
this
sector constituted 4%.Linking Words
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