The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
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The maps illustrate the changes to a small
island
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before and after its development.
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, the
island
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has been significantly modernized, with the addition of new facilities, including accommodations, a restaurant, and a pier,
while
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natural features like palm trees have been preserved.
To begin
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with, the
island
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previously consisted of natural landscapes, with scattered palm trees and a beach on the western side. The central and eastern parts of the
island
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remained completely undeveloped, and there were no paths or tracks for accessibility. The surrounding sea was
also
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left untouched, with no facilities to accommodate boats or other activities. Notably, the
island
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measured approximately 100 meters in total length. After development, the
island
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has been transformed into a tourist destination. The central area now features a reception building, with a restaurant located to the north of it. Several accommodation huts have been built in both the central and eastern sections of the
island
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, connected by a network of footpaths.
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, a pier has been constructed on the southern coastline, allowing access for boats and creating opportunities for water activities.
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infrastructure includes vehicle tracks that connect the pier, reception area, and restaurant,
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footpaths link the accommodations and other parts of the
island
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. The western beach has
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been designated for swimming, adding to the
island
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’s recreational offerings. Importantly, the palm trees have been preserved, maintaining some of the
island
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’s original natural charm.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • island
  • before and after
  • construction
  • tourist facilities
  • maps
  • changes
  • comparison
  • description
  • implications
  • personal opinion
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