The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
The maps illustrate the changes to a small
island
before and after its development. Use synonyms
Overall
, the Linking Words
island
has been significantly modernized, with the addition of new facilities, including accommodations, a restaurant, and a pier, Use synonyms
while
natural features like palm trees have been preserved.
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To begin
with, the Linking Words
island
previously consisted of natural landscapes, with scattered palm trees and a beach on the western side. The central and eastern parts of the Use synonyms
island
remained completely undeveloped, and there were no paths or tracks for accessibility. The surrounding sea was Use synonyms
also
left untouched, with no facilities to accommodate boats or other activities. Notably, the Linking Words
island
measured approximately 100 meters in total length.
After development, the Use synonyms
island
has been transformed into a tourist destination. The central area now features a reception building, with a restaurant located to the north of it. Several accommodation huts have been built in both the central and eastern sections of the Use synonyms
island
, connected by a network of footpaths. Use synonyms
Additionally
, a pier has been constructed on the southern coastline, allowing access for boats and creating opportunities for water activities.
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New
infrastructure includes vehicle tracks that connect the pier, reception area, and restaurant, Add an article
The new
while
footpaths link the accommodations and other parts of the Linking Words
island
. The western beach has Use synonyms
also
been designated for swimming, adding to the Linking Words
island
’s recreational offerings. Importantly, the palm trees have been preserved, maintaining some of the Use synonyms
island
’s original natural charm.Use synonyms
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