The graph below gives information about the preferred leisure activities of Australian children. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of free time exercises of Australian young people.
Overall
, the data reveals clear trends. Highlight a notable amount in watching TV and videos, Linking Words
whereas
skateboarding was seen as the lowest percentage.
Observing the chart in more detail, boys' Linking Words
number
in riding a bike was higher than girls' numbers on computer games accounting for around 70% and almost 60% respectively. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, women's figures in skateboarding were double the Linking Words
number
of men in computer games with almost 40% of females and nearly 80% of males.
Use synonyms
In contrast
, the Linking Words
number
of boys in art which was about 59% was lower than the Use synonyms
number
of girls.
One striking piece of information to be noticed is that both boys and girls watching TV and videos had an equal amount of roughly 100%.Use synonyms
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number with synonyms.
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