The graph below gives information on the number of participants for different activities at one social center in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020
The line chart provides key information about the number of Attendees for different types of activities at the social centre in Melbourne, Australia between the years 2000 and 2020. The units are measured in the number of participants, in each activity.
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that Film club participation and Martial arts remained steady throughout the years, Linking Words
whereas
Amateur dramatics and Table tennis witnessed significant changes.
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According to
what is shown the participation in Musical performances gradually increased from 10 members to 20 during the years 2010 and 2015 Linking Words
then
remained stable in 2020, Linking Words
while
Table tennis reached the highest number of attendees in 2020. Linking Words
Nevertheless
, The majority of participants in Amature dramatics began with approximately 35 people but rapidly dropped to almost 9 participants.Linking Words
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