The pie chart below shows the breakdown for revenue streams for average international football team. The table shows the age distribution of football fans attending the matches of three teams.
The chart provides data related to the economic activity of two types of stores in Australia in 2011.
Overall
, is noticeable that, in general, online shops were more successful than physical ones but Linking Words
that is
not a big deal.
As can be seen in the table there is a huge difference between both commerces, being the online stores 5 times more than the department ones. Linking Words
Consequently
, the growth trend is smaller in traditional up to 4% annually, 2% less than the others. Linking Words
However
, the profit obtained during that year did not differ that much, the non-conventional businesses raising up to 807 AUD, Linking Words
while
websites made slightly more, 863 AUD in total. Linking Words
Lastly
, looking at the sales revenue is appreciated that the variation from one to the other is just 700 AUD, where the online shops were those who achieved the most.
To summarize, is crystal clear that even though people preferred shopping on websites rather than in physical stores, the money raised from both of them does not differ that much, implying that both were essential in 2011.Linking Words
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