32.The chart below shows women aged from 16 to 25 in particular country who prefer to watch or participate in a variety of sports. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The bar diagram illustrates the comparison of young women who did sports to the people who watched them in a specific country in 2000.

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, is appreciated that the proportion of people that participated in those activities is greater than the ones that visually enjoyed.

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, taking a quick glance at the figure reveals that the participation in tennis and golf is , 30%;

however

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, there is a huge difference in the audience, being up to 50% fanatics in the courts,

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in the courses is only 10%. In the case of baseball, nearly 22% play it but only 15% watch it, the same as athletics which involves 20% of females.

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, following quite closely in the percentage of participants is horse riding and racing and badminton with 15% and 11%, respectively;

nevertheless

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, the number of people going to watch them is the lowest rate, only 5%.

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, it can be said that tennis and golf are the ones that women rather play,

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badminton is the least preferred.

In addition

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, the audience in the first one is extraordinary, reaching up to half of the young females, oppositely to the that achieved in badminton or horse riding, being 10 times low.

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participation rate
popularity
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notable differences
cultural factors
social influences
predict
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sporting activities
age group
demographic
engage in sports
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