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The table below shows the percentage of first year students who gave ‘very good’ rating to the resources provided by the college, for three courses. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given.

The table below shows the percentage of first year students who gave ‘very good’ rating to the resources provided by the college, for three courses. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given.
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The table illustrates the average of college Students who received (very good) in 3 categories:
Economics
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Law
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, and
Commerce
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.
Overall
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, as can be seen,
commerce
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 had a significant number on the table.
While
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 the smallest figure is
economics
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 .
Moreover
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,
Law
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 had a middle percentage.
According to
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 the data, pre-course information and teaching had the highest percentage around (95%) in
Commerce
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 and
Economics
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.
However
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,
Economics
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 had
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 Lowest point on the table (59%).
While
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, in teaching portions the
economics
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 percents were the biggest number (95%).
Moreover
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, in two categories the
Law
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 middle shifts of average from 72% to 62%.
On the other hand
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, in the tutor
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 the
economics
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 and
commerce
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 had similar and biggest numbers. In
Law
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 were a small Point (76%). In Resources section had a high portion in
economics
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 and
commerce
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 and in
Law
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 lines around 70%.
Additionally
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, other resources
commerce
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 and
Law
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 had the same number
while
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, in
economics
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 60%.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "moreover, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words economics, law, commerce with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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