The graph compares the sales of different music formats from 1994 to 2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph compares the sales of different music formats from 1994 to 2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The presented line chart demonstrates data about the percentage of selling music in 3 various ways namely, streams, downloads, and CDs purchased between 2011 and 2018.
Overall
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, it was important that the trends of all methods other than Sreams reduced in the seven-year period.
according to
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the diagram, at the start, CDs purchased, the main way that people used for buying music in 2011, hit nearly 55% after that, it declined significantly to roughly a quarter in 2018. Downloads, the second one, hit almost one-third in 2011;
thereafter
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, it rose moderately and touched the vertex at approximately 44% in 2014;
however
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, it dropped somewhat to just under 30% in 2018. The graph shows that Streams' fashion was
in contrast
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to other ones owing to the fact that they scored a tiny fraction in the beginning. Later it leapt considerably to just over 40%, the maximum type of selling music, in 2018.
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